She was scared, almost terrified. But she needed to do it. She wanted to. He reassured that he would be very gentle on her. This was her first time. This could ruin her life. She was too drunk to object. He waited. She finally said "let's do it". And on buzzed the Tattoo Gun.
25 comments:
I love Fiction 55's. They are such a challenge.
Didn't see this one coming.
I knew it had to be something different though! Good one! :)
HAHAHA.. that was nice...
Domain registration india
how that was really good. U r good at this!
Man, yo getting too naughty..
WElcome to the Club!!!
Good one mate.
Together we rule the Zion!
good good!
@all
thanks ppl... I hope this was better than the prev one!
@Sorcy
Zion! Yeah!
@Priyanka
hmmmmm hmmmmm hmmmmmm hmmmmmm
@ Manjari, Ashley, Workhard
Thank you... I suggest you try this stuff too! Waitinggggggg
now that was a twist I didn't expected...
you have written in such a way that mind goes diverted to the other way...
keep penning!!
@mk
you're just being notty! lol
thanks anyways
hehe...u almost got an A-rating certificate from me there :P
Cheers
CRD
Good suspense.
lol, nice nice!
twister for sure...nice!
He he! That was brilliant!
Whoa, whoa, whoa! :D
I was wondering where it was leading. :P
Good one!
ha! fun 55. I suck at fiction, but I must try one.
ha ha ha nice, I liked that part that she got drunk to get a tattoo.
wonder what would he put it on there:
Corny : I was here
Preachy : I did a tattoo on your arm while you were drunk, take that!
Funny : I used to be a man
Twitter: I am twitified
@CRD
lol thanks
@angel from heaven
Thank you
@oRange
Thanks
@Aparna
Glad you lke it. Thanks
@Writerzblock
thanks a lot
@Karthik
don worry man... I'm not goin out of bounds! The mind plays games on you
@Spaz Kumari
thanks all the best. let me know when you do it
@cahxor
I'm glad she was drunk and ended up with only a tattoo! lol
I guess he wud write : "This hurts more! Ainit?"
are they calling IT 'Tattoo gun' now ?
LOL! Keep it up!(not on the Naughty side tho)...
Acha liktha hai re tu...might as well start writing a book and become rich and famous! =)
..::Shnaz::..
Such a well-crafted piece! Very good! Thumbs up!
@uchiha teee
euphemisms are "IN" dude
@Shnaz
I am already rich and famous... Actually I'm tensed about the little time I have to spend all this money!
@Hiyaa
Thanks a lot
that was a real cool one!
@Smita
Thanks a lot... Its one of my best
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