Friday, October 23, 2009

Fiction 55 (2)


She was scared, almost terrified. But she needed to do it. She wanted to. He reassured that he would be very gentle on her. This was her first time. This could ruin her life. She was too drunk to object. He waited. She finally said "let's do it". And on buzzed the Tattoo Gun.


25 comments:

Ashley said...

I love Fiction 55's. They are such a challenge.

Didn't see this one coming.
I knew it had to be something different though! Good one! :)

workhard said...

HAHAHA.. that was nice...


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Manjari Singh said...

how that was really good. U r good at this!

Priyanka. M. said...

Man, yo getting too naughty..

Sorcerer said...

WElcome to the Club!!!

Good one mate.

Together we rule the Zion!

Yemiledu said...

good good!

Saurabh Panshikar said...

@all

thanks ppl... I hope this was better than the prev one!

@Sorcy
Zion! Yeah!

@Priyanka
hmmmmm hmmmmm hmmmmmm hmmmmmm

@ Manjari, Ashley, Workhard
Thank you... I suggest you try this stuff too! Waitinggggggg

mk said...

now that was a twist I didn't expected...
you have written in such a way that mind goes diverted to the other way...
keep penning!!

Saurabh Panshikar said...

@mk
you're just being notty! lol
thanks anyways

CRD said...

hehe...u almost got an A-rating certificate from me there :P


Cheers
CRD

angel from heaven said...

Good suspense.

oRange* said...

lol, nice nice!

Aparna said...

twister for sure...nice!

writerzblock said...

He he! That was brilliant!

Karthik said...

Whoa, whoa, whoa! :D
I was wondering where it was leading. :P
Good one!

Spaz Kumari said...

ha! fun 55. I suck at fiction, but I must try one.

санжог said...

ha ha ha nice, I liked that part that she got drunk to get a tattoo.

wonder what would he put it on there:


Corny : I was here

Preachy : I did a tattoo on your arm while you were drunk, take that!

Funny : I used to be a man

Twitter: I am twitified

Saurabh Panshikar said...

@CRD
lol thanks

@angel from heaven
Thank you
@oRange
Thanks
@Aparna
Glad you lke it. Thanks
@Writerzblock
thanks a lot
@Karthik
don worry man... I'm not goin out of bounds! The mind plays games on you
@Spaz Kumari
thanks all the best. let me know when you do it
@cahxor
I'm glad she was drunk and ended up with only a tattoo! lol
I guess he wud write : "This hurts more! Ainit?"

uchiha teee said...

are they calling IT 'Tattoo gun' now ?

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Reader said...

LOL! Keep it up!(not on the Naughty side tho)...
Acha liktha hai re tu...might as well start writing a book and become rich and famous! =)

..::Shnaz::..

Hiyaa said...

Such a well-crafted piece! Very good! Thumbs up!

Saurabh Panshikar said...

@uchiha teee
euphemisms are "IN" dude

@Shnaz
I am already rich and famous... Actually I'm tensed about the little time I have to spend all this money!

@Hiyaa
Thanks a lot

Smita said...

that was a real cool one!

Saurabh Panshikar said...

@Smita
Thanks a lot... Its one of my best

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