Thursday, October 22, 2009

Fiction 55 #1

She had her seductive gaze on me. She always got what she wanted. She walked to me in her sensuous swagger, licking her lips and purred her demand into my ear. Who was I to object? I was too eager to oblige rather than face her wrath. I immediately put forward her bowl of Cat Food.

17 comments:

Garima Bhatia said...

Hehe..this was too metaphorical. But 'm very sure, either you were thinking naughty or it is a movie hangover :)

Sucha said...

Nice one..) The suspense was good..but I did expect a anticlimax :)

Was looking for ur comment on my blog..could not find ( as u mentioned in Blogerrati) Hope I did not miss it.

Sorcerer said...

haha..I guessed the climax ..Nice~

Priyanka. M. said...

I had guessed whom u wer talking about but my inquisitiveness dragged me till the end..
I knew it was about sweet 'chingi'..

Saurabh Panshikar said...

@everyone

Either you guyz can read my mind, or maybe this stuff is not for me!
Will try harder (and shorter) next time

Ashley said...

Lol! This was nice!
The word purring gave me the mental image of a cat. :)

workhard said...

You are full of surprise....


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Manjari Singh said...

meaaow meeaowww

i loved that

Yemiledu said...

hehe...funny!
hey but iam wondering is there something with the title....55 fictions...i saw this in kathik's blog too...and now i feel like there is something i don't know abot "55 fictions"

comeon do some gyaan-daan now...
lol

Saurabh Panshikar said...

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/55_Fiction

thank you! thank you!

angel from heaven said...

LOLZ good one.I liked the innuendo!!

oRange* said...

ouch. nasty!

writerzblock said...

Good one! But you let the cat out of the bag ;-) mid-way itself, by saying 'purred her demand'. Rather, you could have left it till the end :-)

Karthik said...

ha ha.. lol.. funny... but i guessed it.. :P

Saurabh Panshikar said...

@all above
thanks for the compliments and suggestions too

But i din find an apt word to replace "Purred"

maybe you guyz are too clever for me! lolz

uchiha teee said...

perfect euphemism man !

animax1610 said...

so your girlfrnd eats cat food ha....
geez i didnt know cat food turns the girls on.
btw, mine's eat pedigree

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