Monday, May 3, 2010
55 Fiction #12
A cold shiver ran down his spine. He stared at the killer, fast asleep. The local government had announced a reward on the killer's head. His hands groped the darkness for his camping knife. A swift stab at the neck would do it. "But is it necessary? Afterall there are only 1141 of them left."
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17 comments:
It took me a while to realize what exactly 1141 had to do here.
Nice one! :)
kya kahoon,. u r just too good with ur 55 words!!!
Impressive post....
did hit d bull's eye...
loved it....perfect 55ier...
it has got both environmental, and social domains ...
Great work buddy...kudos to you..
keep writing more...
hahaha... good one...
a straight and strong social msg in just 55 words...
a very crisp message to show something as grave as this...
Really nice concept......!
wow thats an interesting microfiction :)
well written
Too good!
The 1141 bit put a different spin to the story...
wow.....jus 55 words a gr8 message.. :) :)
Excellent work Saurabh :)
You've hit the bulls-eye with that one :D :D
Keep 'em coming!!
brilliant... thats all i can say to this... keep them coming!
Cheers!
Tavish
wow...whatta twist...nice :)
Kya baat hai!! fatte yaar :)
simply superb saurabh! u r a 55-er master.
claps! claps! n more claps :D
kudos. keep 55-ing.
Wow!! That's a good one!!
Liked the message and the twist!! :)
is it alwez dat d lang of fictn shd b ambiguous & HLL ?
i wonder , how easily d othr ppl got itz aftrmath.
@net
Yay I made you think!
@Manjari
Thanks yaar...
@Mahesh
Thanks man... This was a "Mahesh" kinda 55-er. Twist + social msg!
@Chanz, Karan, Surbhi
Thanks guys
@Rajlakshmi, Roshmi, Urvashi
Thank you... Glad you liked it.
@CB
Thanks a lot... Hoping to dish out some more...
@Tavs
yup dude. Thanks for dropping by
@Megha
Dhanyavaad... Aaj kal english madhe comment?
@myself
whoa! thanks for all the appreciation! I likie!
@SG
Thanks a lot
@Aniket
Bloggersfolk are smart you see... Thanks for dropping in...
Excellent!!!
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