Saturday, January 9, 2010

55-er Happy New Year! #6

He thought about her demand.

Was he gonna kick the bottle for her company?

Hell he was. She was everything to him. It was tough, but the right decision. He finally went to pop the question. 

She: "I can't take it anymore. We need to break up".

Turning around, He headed to the nearest bar.





22 comments:

Karthik said...

Oh, man! So morose.
But loved the way you've portrayed it - all in 55 words.
Splendid! :-)

Quirky said...

Ouch! So so ouch SP! But yes, nicely done in 55 words :)

Manjari Singh said...

that was good!

санжог said...

ha ha ha ha ha, I like this!!

No frills no drama!! nicely done.

Megha said...

I think girls can handle a situation better than guys, what do ya say ?

Nicely written, terse.

Sorcerer said...

bravo..bravo..
i like this
:)

one word... :) loved it
thats three word..but I am bad in math

Roshmi Sinha said...

Nicely done!

Saurabh Panshikar said...

@Karthik
I guess these days I can write only upto 55 words! Getting bored too soon!

@Quirky
ThanQ Q...

@Manjari
Thanks... But I don feel this is my best!

@санжог
Hehe Just like me! Straight to the Joint! Err I mean Point

@Megha
No Comments on your Comment
Thanks Anyways

@Sorcerer
Thank a lot! Who cares about yo math until you're spilling goodie goodie comment on my post!

@Roshmi
Thank you!

Oxymoron said...

awesome loved it...now lets go get hammered...

geeta said...

well said!!
in just 55 words...

Raksha Raman said...

Sad about the way this or most of the cases like this one end. You've done a good job though! When you have to say it all without exceeding the word limit, it is definitely not easy. Writer's block? Getting bored and all? Matter of time..I'm sure you'll come back with a bang! Good luck boy!

uchiha teee said...

hehehe,
moral of the micro-story: No one has ever been happy undermining the booze.

7-ate-9 said...

ugh!!! she's a bitch and he's an A-hole!!! ;-)

(pst...pst... truth hurts so I resort to cursing..)

Megha said...

haha...no comments ? that means u think the other way..

Saurabh Panshikar said...

@Oxymoron
Thanks man! Cheers!

@Geeta
Thank you!

@Raksha
Thank You... Thank You!

@Uchiha Teee
Lol! TRu man! Its like... You met with an accident on the only day when you wore a helmet!

@789
I like ppl who curse! Thanks for visiting

@Mehga
Again..... No Comments!

dattaabhishek said...

Got to know the 55 Fiction thing from you. Now i am trying and experimenting with them.

Yours was terribly cut and to the point. Quite a sharp edge I must say. But anyone liking this kind of fiction, would simply admire your style.

Shas said...

hmm....sad but well-written.

Indian Pundit said...

Nice one.
A touch of sadness but good work.

Megha said...

Okay... ;)

Saurabh Panshikar said...

@Dattaabhishek
Thanks man... I think 55 was made for lazy ass ppl like me! Will check your out soon. All the best

@Shas
Thanks

@Indian Pundit
Thank you... Nice name you got!

@Megha
Okkkkkkkkkkk :)

susie said...

neat..

Saurabh Panshikar said...

@Susie
Thanks

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