Friday, January 22, 2010

Poore Bachpan - Fiction 55 #7

After 25 years as a driver, John finally retired and bought his own taxi. On his first day on the job this customer tapped his shoulder to ask him a place. John freaked out so much that he swerved and hit a tree. Who could blame him? Afterall his previous job was driving...


This 55-er is inspired from a joke that I got online. So I can't claim the originality award for this. But I did do the tough task of chopping off the excess words!


санжог said...

he, he, he, HA HA HA HA HA.


very good one!!

Sorcerer said...

me too got it

good one..good one..

Karthik said...

ohhh my my my my.....!!! It was bloody tough for me, I should admit.
This is what I think. Correct me if I'm wrong. He was a driver of morgue van or antim yatra bus driver, wasn't he?
Awesome, man!! I loved it even if I'm wrong, for it made me think (something I rarely do). :P :P

Neha said...

darn, that was out of the blue; rather out of the coffin completely..too good..:D

Gyanban said...

liked it ...i almost missed the last word and was about to post a comment saying and then what happened? ..but then i did chance upon the critical last word...good stuff.

Karthik said...

Dooooooood, I didn't notice the last word at the bottom when I first read it. I got it without reading it.. Yaaaayyy!!! Hurrraaaayy!! ;)

Megha said...

haha....nashib heart attack nahi ala tyala

shilpa said...

hey u wrote nice..i liked it...i may give a suggestion next time when u go to a hair cut after 2 to 3 months possibly..go on such a day when macthes r nt there...

Shilpa Garg said...

That's a good one! I thought you wanted us to speculate, what he was driving and I got my answer. As I was clicking to post a comment, I saw "Hearses"! I thought so too! :)

Saurabh Panshikar said...

Thank you...

Thank you... C mon guys it was not a brain teaser or something!

W00t? I read each and every word of your loooooong posts and you don even read my f55 fully?

Thanks a lot! Outta the coffin... yeah

thanks a lot... I guess the soul of f55 is in the last sentence/word

Haha Mag tyachi coffin kon drive karnar?

@Shilpa Barve
Thank you for visiting! (Finally!)

@Shilpa Garg
I should've changed the color of hearses! I mean the font color. I even linked a wikipedia entry to it! Ppl are failing to SPOT it itself.... How are they gonna click it?

Shruti Mukundan said...

hee hee.. i didnt get it in first shot actually. went thru the comments section n then found out. gues i need to change my starter ;)

Saurabh Panshikar said...

Hehe... Just charging your batteries will do the job!

Nethra said...

I already know the story, but liked the way you have presented it. :)

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