Friday, January 22, 2010

Poore Bachpan - Fiction 55 #7

After 25 years as a driver, John finally retired and bought his own taxi. On his first day on the job this customer tapped his shoulder to ask him a place. John freaked out so much that he swerved and hit a tree. Who could blame him? Afterall his previous job was driving...














Hearses!

This 55-er is inspired from a joke that I got online. So I can't claim the originality award for this. But I did do the tough task of chopping off the excess words!


13 comments:

санжог said...

he, he, he, HA HA HA HA HA.

BTW, I GOT IT.

very good one!!

Sorcerer said...

me too got it

good one..good one..

Karthik said...

ohhh my my my my.....!!! It was bloody tough for me, I should admit.
This is what I think. Correct me if I'm wrong. He was a driver of morgue van or antim yatra bus driver, wasn't he?
Awesome, man!! I loved it even if I'm wrong, for it made me think (something I rarely do). :P :P

Neha said...

darn, that was out of the blue; rather out of the coffin completely..too good..:D

Gyanban said...

liked it ...i almost missed the last word and was about to post a comment saying and then what happened? ..but then i did chance upon the critical last word...good stuff.

Karthik said...

Dooooooood, I didn't notice the last word at the bottom when I first read it. I got it without reading it.. Yaaaayyy!!! Hurrraaaayy!! ;)

Megha said...

haha....nashib heart attack nahi ala tyala

shilpa said...

hey u wrote nice..i liked it...i may give a suggestion next time when u go to a hair cut after 2 to 3 months possibly..go on such a day when macthes r nt there...

Shilpa Garg said...

That's a good one! I thought you wanted us to speculate, what he was driving and I got my answer. As I was clicking to post a comment, I saw "Hearses"! I thought so too! :)

Saurabh Panshikar said...

@Sanju
Thank you...

@Sorcerer
Thank you... C mon guys it was not a brain teaser or something!

@Karthik
W00t? I read each and every word of your loooooong posts and you don even read my f55 fully?

@Neha
Thanks a lot! Outta the coffin... yeah

@Gyanban
thanks a lot... I guess the soul of f55 is in the last sentence/word

@Megha
Haha Mag tyachi coffin kon drive karnar?

@Shilpa Barve
Thank you for visiting! (Finally!)

@Shilpa Garg
I should've changed the color of hearses! I mean the font color. I even linked a wikipedia entry to it! Ppl are failing to SPOT it itself.... How are they gonna click it?

Shruti Mukundan said...

hee hee.. i didnt get it in first shot actually. went thru the comments section n then found out. gues i need to change my starter ;)

Saurabh Panshikar said...

@SM
Hehe... Just charging your batteries will do the job!

Nethra said...

I already know the story, but liked the way you have presented it. :)

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