She glanced towards me... A little scared, a little confused. I gave her an assuring smile that maybe boosted her confidence a little. She inched closer towards me locking her eyes with mine; piercing, inquiring... Nervously looking around, she spoke in a hushed voice...
"Beta Passbook update karke milega kya?"
13 comments:
This seems to be the other extreme of decency and courtesy
lol..nice one :D
Haha! Had half guessed it but what I didn't expect was that 'she' was old enough to address you as 'beta'! :) Good one! :)
haha...interesting...nice build up...though i was expecting an ending of this sort....
hehe.... nice one!! "Beta" was the real twist ;)
:P :P
Nice one....!!
I liked it coz i witnessed such scenarios much often in post-offices and banks ...
Happening and nostalgic for me :)
hehee nice :) based or experience ??? :)
hehe...nice...
Being a pervert, I was hoping for something else and after reading that beta, I went :(
Anyway, nice one. :)
beta beta??? :P sala...:P beta
the working in bank is showing....or may be taking a toll on you...
Nicely done... with a twist in the tale.
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