Saturday, June 12, 2010

The Question



She glanced towards me... A little scared, a little confused. I gave her an assuring smile that maybe boosted her confidence a little. She inched closer towards me locking her eyes with mine; piercing, inquiring... Nervously looking around, she spoke in a hushed voice...




"Beta Passbook update karke milega kya?"

13 comments:

BK Chowla, said...

This seems to be the other extreme of decency and courtesy

Neha said...

lol..nice one :D

Raksha Raman said...

Haha! Had half guessed it but what I didn't expect was that 'she' was old enough to address you as 'beta'! :) Good one! :)

Oxymoron said...

haha...interesting...nice build up...though i was expecting an ending of this sort....

Surbhi Jain said...

hehe.... nice one!! "Beta" was the real twist ;)

Urvashi said...

:P :P

Nice one....!!

Mahesh Kalaal said...

I liked it coz i witnessed such scenarios much often in post-offices and banks ...
Happening and nostalgic for me :)

Rajlakshmi said...

hehee nice :) based or experience ??? :)

Megha said...

hehe...nice...

Nethra said...

Being a pervert, I was hoping for something else and after reading that beta, I went :(
Anyway, nice one. :)

Siddhesh 'Ravan' Kabe said...

beta beta??? :P sala...:P beta

Karan Shah said...

the working in bank is showing....or may be taking a toll on you...

Roshmi Sinha said...

Nicely done... with a twist in the tale.

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