Saturday, February 27, 2010

Another 55-er Gosh I need to start numbering them #9

He stared at his shivering hands. Finally he had killed the SOB. A clean kill. He fixed himself a stiff scotch and took a gulp. In his world people are known by the number of kills achieved. He’d soon have an established business now. 

“Acme Stray Dog Exterminator Services”


Chanz said...

OMG... lol.. This was so funny.. Acme Stray Dog Exterminatr Service...

Megha said...

Nice...killing is not easy

Chatterbox said...

That was brilliant :)

fantastic ending!!

Nethra said...

I hate people who kill dogs. I love dogs.
By the way, nice story. :)

Saurabh Panshikar said...

Thank you!

He he... Your comment is confusing ;-)

Thanks a lot...

He he... Thanks.
Even I love dogs. I got 3! But strays can be a pain sometimes. Just today this stray caused an accident which left a guy bleeding heavily...

Shas said...

Clean kill in 55words.
There should be a better n less painful ways of curing the stray dog problem.

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Nethra said...

I love stray dogs too. They are also animals. They become pain in ass just because a dog made one guy bleed, huh? Then what about us? We kill all possible animals. Should someone exterminate us.

akanksha said...

u have four dogs then y u said three???also that was kinda funny but cruel!

Siddhesh 'Ravan' Kabe said...

aaila... tune toh usko establish kar diya...:P


Saurabh Panshikar said...

Thanks... Even I feel the same... I had heard about lethal injections, but dunno if they're used.

Thanks a lotttttt
Coming from the queen of 55-ers, I must say I'm flattered!
And thanks for the award! I got a gr8 holi gift!

@Maneka ooops I mean Nethra
You should come to our place where strays run their own mafia! They chase lil kids riding cycles and they have like a barking mehfil all night. And as you said, somebody HAS to exterminate us! But not much guts around....

Sadly the Pomerian - Tekas dies 2 months back due to an infection. And the scarcity of vets in Roha din help much :-(

Thanks! Long time since you commented on my blog!

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Karthik said...

Lol.. Awesome!
Could you send the protagonist of this 55er to my place please? It will be very helpful. :D

Happy Holi! Have fun. :)

Anonymous said...

nice post. thanks.

Avada Kedavra said...

OH god that was very sad. But very nicely written!

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Anil P said...

In reality it is a terrible sight!

Saurabh Panshikar said...

He he... Sure. Only if this were not fiction!

Thanks. Welcome

@Avada Kedavra
Thank You.

Bad Bad Spammer! No Thank you for you!

@Anil P
Yup I guess so... You've seen it?

Rajlakshmi said...

lolzzz thats a cool one :D
well written

Saurabh Panshikar said...

Thank you.. And Thanks for visiting too...

Magali said...

Killing dogs boohoo :(
Nice one though.

Saurabh Panshikar said...

Me don't support it either... But blog he liye karna padta hai re!

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