Saturday, February 27, 2010

Another 55-er Gosh I need to start numbering them #9

He stared at his shivering hands. Finally he had killed the SOB. A clean kill. He fixed himself a stiff scotch and took a gulp. In his world people are known by the number of kills achieved. He’d soon have an established business now. 





“Acme Stray Dog Exterminator Services”

22 comments:

Chanz said...

OMG... lol.. This was so funny.. Acme Stray Dog Exterminatr Service...

Megha said...

:(
Nice...killing is not easy

Chatterbox said...

That was brilliant :)

fantastic ending!!

Nethra said...

I hate people who kill dogs. I love dogs.
By the way, nice story. :)

Saurabh Panshikar said...

@Chanz
Thank you!

@Megha
He he... Your comment is confusing ;-)

@Chatterbox
Thanks a lot...

@Nethra
He he... Thanks.
Even I love dogs. I got 3! But strays can be a pain sometimes. Just today this stray caused an accident which left a guy bleeding heavily...

Shas said...

Clean kill in 55words.
There should be a better n less painful ways of curing the stray dog problem.

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Nethra said...

I love stray dogs too. They are also animals. They become pain in ass just because a dog made one guy bleed, huh? Then what about us? We kill all possible animals. Should someone exterminate us.

akanksha said...

u have four dogs then y u said three???also that was kinda funny but cruel!

Siddhesh 'Ravan' Kabe said...

aaila... tune toh usko establish kar diya...:P

good

Saurabh Panshikar said...

@Shas
Thanks... Even I feel the same... I had heard about lethal injections, but dunno if they're used.

@Shruti
Thanks a lotttttt
Coming from the queen of 55-ers, I must say I'm flattered!
And thanks for the award! I got a gr8 holi gift!

@Maneka ooops I mean Nethra
You should come to our place where strays run their own mafia! They chase lil kids riding cycles and they have like a barking mehfil all night. And as you said, somebody HAS to exterminate us! But not much guts around....

@Aka
Sadly the Pomerian - Tekas dies 2 months back due to an infection. And the scarcity of vets in Roha din help much :-(

@Ravan
Thanks! Long time since you commented on my blog!

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Karthik said...

Lol.. Awesome!
Could you send the protagonist of this 55er to my place please? It will be very helpful. :D

Happy Holi! Have fun. :)

Anonymous said...

nice post. thanks.

Avada Kedavra said...

OH god that was very sad. But very nicely written!

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Anil P said...

In reality it is a terrible sight!

Saurabh Panshikar said...

@Karthik
He he... Sure. Only if this were not fiction!

@Anon
Thanks. Welcome

@Avada Kedavra
Thank You.

@Anon
Bad Bad Spammer! No Thank you for you!

@Anil P
Yup I guess so... You've seen it?

Rajlakshmi said...

lolzzz thats a cool one :D
well written

Saurabh Panshikar said...

@Rajlakshmi
Thank you.. And Thanks for visiting too...

Magali said...

Killing dogs boohoo :(
Nice one though.

Saurabh Panshikar said...

Me don't support it either... But blog he liye karna padta hai re!

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