Wednesday, November 10, 2010

The battle

I, With my chin up, upholding my poise,
He takes his position with his weapon of choice.

I surrender meekly as I wanna survive,
Just hoping somehow I'll come out alive.

I close my eyes as he makes his move first,
I realise being a man is really a curse.

With a swish the merciless steel cuts through my skin,
Blood gushes out to see who committed this sin.

He smiles cheekily at me as I stare, my eyes grave,
He lunges forward and dabs a little after-shave!

Now wasn't that a close shave? LITERALLY!

15 comments:

Neha said...

Loved it..when I read this in sms, i was LOLing :P

Anonymous said...

Ye huie na baat.. shayari se shave tak....

IIM ka Sarkari Babu said...

Ha ha ha !!! Man that was a mast ending !!!

Kshitij said...

Hmmmm..

Saurabh.. I think same strategy overuse kar raha hai tuu mere bhai... Most of your posts are coming out to be with unexpected ends... like ekdum se end mei twist... u getting me?

I think you should try new things... new ideas... Kuch naya... different...

Chanz said...

God, I loved it... U are a master in this...

Abhilash Ruhela said...

A fine post.

Abhilash Ruhela- The Blogger said...

A fine post

Rajlakshmi said...

hahahaha :D i loved the endings ypu write for your stories :D
wonderful

Megha said...

haha....ekdum mast :)

chhavi said...

Well written :)

Megha said...

i thought it would be some ketchup thing...but it turned out shaving :) nice twist :)

Megha said...

i thought it would be some ketchup thing...but it turned out shaving :) nice twist :)

writerzblock said...

Ha ha, but I have to spoil the fun by saying I knew THAT was coming :-)

Yemiledu said...

hahaha..nice one bro!!!

Varsha said...

close shave indeed!

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