Wednesday, August 18, 2010

Burning...

He felt the club was his home


He'd be there all the time


Loafing around with friends


Drinking to the last dime.






One day she came in with her sultry swagger


He soon lost his sense


Her presence oozed with attitude


That seemed to make him tense






Oh his eyes burned... Burned like fire






She threw a quick glance around


Maybe something of interest she found


His eyes begged for her attention


But sadly there was no mention.






Oh his eyes burned, burned with desire






He decided it was now or never


He'd do anything whatsoever


Gathering his courage he went up to dance


Flooring her on the floor was his only chance






Oh his eyes burned, burned with pure lust






She was a dirty dancer


She surely knew her moves


He was going crazy


Doing the musical grooves






She started for the exit


He didn't know what was next


Its best to follow her out


Maybe that was what was best?






She walked through the dark alley


Without a sight behind


He thought she's playing a game


Damn she looked so fine






Oh his eyes were burning, burning with hunger






He took a deep breath and tried to grab her hand


She looked into his eyes trying make him understand


He clenched it and pulled her towards him


That was when she reached into her purse and...






Oh his eyes were burning... Just burning!
 

12 comments:

Reshma Gore said...

Saw the pic before i read the blog..so everytime you mentioned his eyes burned i kept asking "are you sure its not from the pepper spray?" lol but good one man. Love the woman for pepper spraying that guy. Get a hint people! Good post!

dialoguewithyou said...

Very good :)
Loved the way you kept the suspense till the end :)

Cheers!!

Chanz said...

reminds me, I still havent bought a new one... Shit shit shit....

Nethra said...

Lol! :D That was quite good. I saw the pic before reading the poem so it kinda gave away the climax.

Rajlakshmi said...

serves him good :D
loved the narration... beautifully penned.

Kshitij said...

Very nice :)

Neha said...

the thing was soooo romantic until the last line! :(

your lines will do magic in a rap song lyrics! \m/

trust me!

Yemiledu said...

Totally loved the narration!!


i guess i have a lot many to read :)

Urvashi said...

haha...Good one....!! :D :D

I dint know that u even wrote poems..!! :)

Megha said...

nice one....
lesson to learn : if a girl smiles at you it doesn't mean she is hitting on you :D

Shail Raghuvanshi said...

Kya piece of poetry hai.

Just loved it.
Good that I didn't see the picture first.

Keep it going. Ha Ha.

Shail

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